Birth rate explotion is one of problem which can conclude other aspect and become to demolish ones country with a problem like a poor, wredwound, and slums. In 1965 and 1975 planned parenthood become to plant in the world. A downing point fertility cause this program very shocking. 12 percent down point, 4635 become 4068. this value in every country not same but it’s a indicator for make world without fertility. A statistic says that in 2025 we don’t have a fertility problem but in 2004 we standing fight a fertility problem. What’s wrong about this, I think we must refresh this system in order to compatible with long period. There are three aspect.
First, the country who have this program, must got a big finance and using it for this program with comprehensive. Not only build a program but also drive it, and developing it. Some country just drive it not developing it’s program, so in a middle time this program can’t walk.
Second, make a donation. Advance country should know if they donate this program to other (development country) who have fertility problem, it’s downing a point of problem in the world (fertility problem). This decade very small donate for this program whereas a work holder for this sector very small in development country. Some information, a wisdom, equipment, don’t have a perfect. With donate a world without fertility problem were close.
Third, a non effective program. A program doesn’t have a power, haven’t attention, low interest so it’s hard to grow up this program. We must giving more power and attention for this program, also make and gift a good mainset for this to other people.
In conclution, all that can happen with our hand and other. And then if donation for this program fast, big donation a comprehensive and effective planning more good for a better world to fight a problem fertility. We must hope this program keep walk and cove all country for a better of our generation.
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